Sunday, May 8, 2011




Otherwise voluntarily in the army that is defending the homeland and the dignity and pride in the military be idle that the service is not easy task of deadlines to achieve your dream and determination you protect can your country from the enemy

1 comment:

  1. Chemar,

    Your concept is good, however the grammar and sentence structure needs a lot of work. I also expected a minimum of 200 words. I will discuss this with you further in class.

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